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Spectralbeacon

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The artyle you have is sharp and unique and feels grounded, however i have a few notes of our composition. In the shot everything is happening in the upper left corner and makes the rest of the image feel empty and unnecessary. I always aim to keep characters looking into the frame instead of outside the frame so that the viewer has a line of action to follow

Bundeluxe responds:

Thank you for your honest criticism, I really appreciate it. I am still learning so it's always nice to hear from people with a bit more experience in crafting more interesting looking shots, I'll definitely keep this in mind next time.

I just gotta say, I love Mummy Ball. Like, i got nothing else, great shading and detail, especially the light reflecting on the bottom in the shadow!

I really like the composition you have going on with this! I would play up the style on Kingpins face a little more to help make him pop, maybe try some half tone dots or stylized shadows to better reflect how miles is simplified below!

ToasT-Arts responds:

Good notes I really appreciate the feedback

Nice work on this, i think the colors work great and the silhouette looks good for the upper half, my only critique being that the foot placement is tricky to read

FrankenToon responds:

I can totally see what you mean, and there's definitely room for improvement on the feet. I guess it was a bit rushed, either the lighting or design-wise? Either way, thanks so much for the critique!!

Background Designer and Painter on a variety of projects. Always open for critique!

Nicholas (Cole) @Spectralbeacon

Age 30

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United States

Joined on 5/19/15

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